Case Study ·

Accepted to
Carnegie Mellon and UC Berkeley

Synthetic Biology and Biomedical Engineering
Grace started in 10th grade with an SAT of 1480 and a broad interest in biology and engineering. A research mentorship and a synthetic biology focus carried her to Carnegie Mellon and UC Berkeley, two of her reach schools.
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About Grace

Application Persona · the theme that tied it all together

“An emerging science leader who is passionate about synthetic biology and wants to ignite the awe-inspiring nature of science in others”

Started
10th grade
From
Pennsylvania
GPA
4.54 / 5.0 weighted
Test score
SAT 1480

Challenges and Activities: Before and After

Where Grace started
Where Grace finished
Broad STEM interestBiology and engineering, no specific field yet
Synthetic biology focusBiomedical engineering, built through summers and mentorship
SAT 1480Below the average at her target schools
Research mentorshipStudied CRISPR gene editing with a cancer center researcher
New to science clubsResearched every STEM group at her school
Captain and club founderScience Olympiad captain; co-founded a science peer tutoring club
Two reach schoolsCarnegie Mellon and UC Berkeley on her list
Admitted to bothPlus UC San Diego

How did InGenius Prep Help?

A Stanford University Former Admissions Officer and a Swarthmore College Graduate Coach worked with Grace 2-on-1 from 10th grade through the application.

  1. 10th grade

    Joining in

    She joined Science Olympiad, took challenging STEM courses and began researching colleges.

    Through Candidacy Building
  2. Summers

    Science every summer

    Programs at Harvard and the Boston Leadership Institute, plus a pharmaceutical company internship, deepened her interest in biomedical engineering.

  3. 11th grade

    Persona and school list

    Application prep began early in the year. The team set her synthetic biology persona and named Carnegie Mellon and UC Berkeley as reaches.

    Through Application Counseling
  4. 12th grade

    Essays and final review

    Supplements tied her experiences to molecular biology and her love of baking. The team reviewed the full application.

Questions About This Case

How did Grace get into Carnegie Mellon with a 1480 SAT?

A research mentorship on CRISPR gene editing, leadership in Science Olympiad and her own tutoring club, and a clear synthetic biology persona helped balance her score.

When did she start working with InGenius Prep?

In 10th grade, through Candidacy Building, with Application Counseling starting at the beginning of 11th grade.

What did she write about for Carnegie Mellon?

One essay linked her past experiences to her intended major, molecular biology. Another showed her love of baking and connected it to science.

What was her Application Persona?

An emerging science leader who is passionate about synthetic biology and wants to ignite the awe-inspiring nature of science in others.

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