Where Leah started
Where Leah finished
Broad STEM interestsHard to stand out at a very competitive school
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Neuroscience as her majorA specific field that set her apart
Science and art kept separateTwo interests with no clear link
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One STEAM profileHer activities list joined neuroscience and art
Long, mixed activities listNot every activity matched her goals
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Focused activities listLab research and art leadership up front
Early essay draftsNeeded more specific detail
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Personal, specific essaysAdmitted to MIT, Early Action