New York University is a private research school with nearly 200 years of history. [1] With a curriculum originally founded on the tenets of secular education, NYU stands today as one of the top schools in the nation with a diverse community and competitive admissions process. To help students in their essay responses, here’s InGenius Prep’s guide to the NYU supplemental essay.
NYU Supplemental Essay
We are looking for students who want to be bridge builders—students who can connect people, groups, and ideas to span divides, foster understanding, and promote collaboration within a dynamic, interconnected, and vibrant global academic community. We are eager for you to tell us how your experiences have helped you understand what qualities and efforts are needed to bridge divides so that people can better learn and work together.
Please consider one or more of the following questions in your essay:
1. Tell us about a time you encountered a perspective different from your own. What did you learn—about yourself, the other person, or the world?
2. Tell us about an experience you’ve had working with others who have different backgrounds or perspectives. What challenges did your group face? Did you overcome them, and if so, how? What role did you try to play in helping people to work together, and what did you learn from your efforts?
3. What specific actions have you taken to build bridges between diverse groups, ideas, or cultures?
4. Tell us about someone you’ve observed who does a particularly good job helping people think or work together. How does this person set the stage for common exploration or work? How do they react when difficulties or dissensions arise?
Insights From a NYU Former Admissions Officer
Katerina Jennings, a Former NYU Admissions Officer with InGenius Prep, shares her expert insights on the updated NYU supplemental essay prompt. During her years as Assistant Director of Admissions, she managed recruitment for three of NYU’s ten undergraduate schools, reviewed applications, and counseled students on crafting strong applications. Below, she offers her top tips for writing an outstanding NYU supplemental essay.
This prompt is a slightly updated version of the entirely new prompt NYU revealed for the last cycle, which entirely replaced the classic ‘Why NYU?’ essay that has been the go-to for the past decade. The updated supplemental essay invites students to reflect on “bridge building” in their own lives, whether through major challenges or small acts of connection. [2]
The goal behind this updated prompt, like last year’s prompt, is to try and establish a match between the applicant and NYU’s values, including – but not limited to – three key tenets: self-awareness, ability to connect with others different from oneself, and building community. The hope is that this question will help NYU put together a diverse class, and so it is up to the student to showcase what about their background or experiences makes them truly unique and, crucially, able to connect with others who are truly unique and thus different from themselves.
Her advice to students would be to start with a very general brainstorm about examples in which they’ve ‘bridge-built’ in their lives, not perfectionism; jot down ideas freely before editing for clarity and brevity (it’s a 250-word max essay). A student’s bridge could be a grand life experience or a small but meaningful moment of uniting people or ideas. The student should show how they’ve built connections through experiences that challenged their perspectives, rather than telling the admissions officer they’ve done so. NYU seeks students ready to develop and use these skills to make an impact.
A common style of answer that admissions officers will anticipate will be what is sometimes nicknamed the ‘trauma essay’, where students open up about difficulties in their lives – to be clear, this is not inherently a negative style of essay response, as we all know (some students will indeed have experienced difficulties that fit those three NYU tenets perfectly); however, some students attempting to write in this style may inadvertently come off as un-self-aware and/or unable to connect with others different from themselves if they write from a perhaps insincere viewpoint or if they are intentionally trying to shock the admissions officer.
So, instead, Katerina would suggest that students talk about action items they have already done previously that evince the three tenets of NYU. For example, a student could discuss a time they volunteered at a local charity in support of a minority group they are not a member of, what they learnt from that experience, what lessons from that experience they’ll bring to college, and thus what specific clubs/societies offered at NYU they’ll join/start, etc. Students could also approach this like a “conflict” essay (which they may have written for other schools) and discuss how they connected with someone with a different viewpoint and what they’ll take from that experience into NYU.
Additional Tips for Writing the NYU Supplemental Essay
Here are some additional things to keep in mind as you write your NYU supplemental essay [3]:
• Writing at a college level: This is a given, but it remains critical. NYU Admissions Officers want to see that students are using a mature voice (an advanced narrative flow) with proper syntax/spelling/grammar/punctuation – but this doesn’t mean that the essay can’t be creative!
• Self-aware & culturally-aware introspection: NYU Admissions Officers want to see that students are self-aware, display a mature, thorough understanding of their views and perspectives, and can rationally back up their arguments as needed.
• Do the research: Whenever and wherever possible, students should tie their response to programs and/or opportunities at the university that interest them, especially if they’re related to the program(s) they’re applying for. If applying to a NYC program, they should tie the response to the school and/or major that they’re applying for. If applying to NYU Abu Dhabi or NYU Shanghai, they can tie it to either the campus or their major(s) of interest.
While supplemental essays are a great way to stand out from the crowd, students must approach them with the right mindset. Take every opportunity to show a new side of your profile and make the connection between your experiences and your future at NYU. Admissions Officers are looking for applicants who will make a good fit for their school, so research NYU’s values and embody those traits throughout your supplemental essay and your application.
If you need personalized advice from an admissions expert, InGenius Prep is here to help! Our team of Former Admissions Officers has helped over 6,000 students gain admission to the schools of their dreams, including Princeton, Harvard, and Dartmouth. We can help you, too!
Book a free strategy call and get started on your admissions journey today!